Book review#1

It was the day to leave for France from America on a school trip. The big bus was already waiting outside the school. A boy,Donut first saw it, he looks so excited, he had never seen such a big bus. The way around the big bus was crowded with children and their parents.
Miss Cherry, Mr Hopkins, Mrs Summerday and Mr Macdonald were going with children.
This trip's plan was that children would be away for a week, and they were going by the big bus to Dover.
Children left for french while waving hands to their parents. They spend hull time in the big bus on the way to France.
And they arrived at a dock, and then Mr Hopkins was doubted from French policeman. Mr Hopkins was seemed as international criminal. Sam's mother and Miss Cherry was laughing.
After that the big bus arrived at a small, pretty town, right beside the banks of a big river. There was a beautiful building which has lots of big windows and was covered with ivy. This building was the hotel for children. They enjoyed the hotel's night very much.
Next day, children were given a card on a piece of red string and printed each child's name, the name of the place
where they were staying, teacher's name and an emergency telephone number. Mr Hopkins gave it them to ask for help when children did get lost.
They enjoyed French scenery from the bus's window.
As soon as they got off the bus and they were spilited into groups and they visited the oldest church in Paris, Saint Germain.
But!! A happning was happened. Mr Hopkins was taken away by two strangers.
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Who were those men? Where they taken away Mr Hopkins? Why did they took him away?
This story continued on " French Adventures" part 2.